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:T: Aladdin by Dapyzux :T: Aladdin by Dapyzux
La terminé!! :dummy:
para :icontheakon:

espero que sea de su agrado <3!
por eso dije q se tapaba(?)
sdasdasd
me gustó :iconmahfeelzplz: y era... poner bendas o nada :iconididplz:

además~ Tobu si tiene pechos(????) xDD es q con su ropa taaaaan gigante y bendas de presión, no se le veían ni un cachito :iconmiochottoniplz:

aunque todo va a cambiar cuando evolucione(???):iconteheplz:

asdasd
x3 me viro!

a trabajar en los secret santas!:iconsuperw00tplz:



Tobuko © *Dapyzux
Aladdin © Disney
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:iconstardazzle:
Hello there! :wave: I hope you won't mind a stranger giving you a critique, but here goes!

Okay, for the most part, the drawing looks nice; cute to be more specific. You win points for the pose that you drew and how you drew her expression that gives off her bubbly personality. You made a good choice of colors here, and the whole color palette in general (including the background) is really something to appreciate. :aww:

Hmmm I guess the only thing I would point out here was her height; ideally in drawing, a person must be 7 or 8 heads tall. From what I counted here, she only has 4.5 to 5 heads tall only (but this is anime we're talking about here, I dunno if that's an exception, but that's one of the rules you shouldn't skip on to).

The shading is also to simple, try to shade more areas, like clothing folds and such, to make it seem more 'real', even for anime style. :D

Well, that's all I can offer. Sorry if this offends you in some way or another, just giving me two cents. >w<
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Walter11x21 Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ah que guapa *A* aún con pantos bombachos se mira hermosa x3
el fondo es amorsh!
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AnitaCristi Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
BOOBIES!!!!

dfgjkshdfgsdfj Se ve todo bonito, Dany uwu <3 Aunque ya te lo habia dicho asldkjvadnjf
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Lilycal Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
BABYYYYYY AAAAAAAAA JAKGDHJKSAFSAFASDSA
te quedo todo precioso dapyy!!! :iconcannotevenplz:
se mira tan linda adfasfdsa su trajecito esta todo beshooo :iconkaminaoathplz: <3<3<3<3
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SoyFumi Dec 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Insisto en que todo lo que haces es genial y muy lindo.
Tobuko se ve tan tierna y el fondo me encanta!
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:iconnessatasartir:
Pero se hubiera visto mejor sin vendas :I *le pegan*
Ok ya en serio xD se ve hermosa! me gusta como te quedo x3 y no sabia que tuviera tanta pechonalidad, en verdad que la ropa las esconde muy bien xD
me muero por ver su evolucion :iconheplz:
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Pankoo Dec 23, 2012  Student General Artist
DSdADS Dapy que cosita tna adorableee :C - apapacha a tobuko-
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ADACEV-Saile Dec 22, 2012  Student General Artist
Se ve muy linda! :3 Deee arabia soooooyy noche y dia por iguaaaal ...(me acorde de la cancion de aladin XD)
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Dapyzux Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XDD
gracias!! <3
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:iconadacev-saile:
ADACEV-Saile Dec 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Denada :3
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Chibitinna Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Asdfgsdfghj esa pose :iconemociplz: Se ve tan tierna! :iconsobeautifulplz:
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