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:T: Aladdin by Dapyzux :T: Aladdin by Dapyzux
La terminé!! :dummy:
para :icontheakon:

espero que sea de su agrado <3!
por eso dije q se tapaba(?)
sdasdasd
me gustó :iconmahfeelzplz: y era... poner bendas o nada :iconididplz:

además~ Tobu si tiene pechos(????) xDD es q con su ropa taaaaan gigante y bendas de presión, no se le veían ni un cachito :iconmiochottoniplz:

aunque todo va a cambiar cuando evolucione(???):iconteheplz:

asdasd
x3 me viro!

a trabajar en los secret santas!:iconsuperw00tplz:



Tobuko © *Dapyzux
Aladdin © Disney
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:iconstardazzle:
Hello there! :wave: I hope you won't mind a stranger giving you a critique, but here goes!

Okay, for the most part, the drawing looks nice; cute to be more specific. You win points for the pose that you drew and how you drew her expression that gives off her bubbly personality. You made a good choice of colors here, and the whole color palette in general (including the background) is really something to appreciate. :aww:

Hmmm I guess the only thing I would point out here was her height; ideally in drawing, a person must be 7 or 8 heads tall. From what I counted here, she only has 4.5 to 5 heads tall only (but this is anime we're talking about here, I dunno if that's an exception, but that's one of the rules you shouldn't skip on to).

The shading is also to simple, try to shade more areas, like clothing folds and such, to make it seem more 'real', even for anime style. :D

Well, that's all I can offer. Sorry if this offends you in some way or another, just giving me two cents. >w<
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Walter11x21 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ah que guapa *A* aún con pantos bombachos se mira hermosa x3
el fondo es amorsh!
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AnitaCristi Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
BOOBIES!!!!

dfgjkshdfgsdfj Se ve todo bonito, Dany uwu <3 Aunque ya te lo habia dicho asldkjvadnjf
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Lilycal Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
BABYYYYYY AAAAAAAAA JAKGDHJKSAFSAFASDSA
te quedo todo precioso dapyy!!! :iconcannotevenplz:
se mira tan linda adfasfdsa su trajecito esta todo beshooo :iconkaminaoathplz: <3<3<3<3
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:iconsoyfumi:
SoyFumi Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Insisto en que todo lo que haces es genial y muy lindo.
Tobuko se ve tan tierna y el fondo me encanta!
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NessaTasartir Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
Pero se hubiera visto mejor sin vendas :I *le pegan*
Ok ya en serio xD se ve hermosa! me gusta como te quedo x3 y no sabia que tuviera tanta pechonalidad, en verdad que la ropa las esconde muy bien xD
me muero por ver su evolucion :iconheplz:
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:iconpankoo:
Pankoo Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student General Artist
DSdADS Dapy que cosita tna adorableee :C - apapacha a tobuko-
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:iconadacev-saile:
ADACEV-Saile Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student General Artist
Se ve muy linda! :3 Deee arabia soooooyy noche y dia por iguaaaal ...(me acorde de la cancion de aladin XD)
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:icondapyzux:
Dapyzux Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XDD
gracias!! <3
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:iconadacev-saile:
ADACEV-Saile Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Denada :3
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:iconchibitinna:
Chibitinna Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Asdfgsdfghj esa pose :iconemociplz: Se ve tan tierna! :iconsobeautifulplz:
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:icondapyzux:
Dapyzux Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
webé más q la *** por q saliera la pose(?)
dafdsafsf
muchas gracias chibiiiii ;//v///;!

asdsad si... tierna y sexy(?) :iconheplz:
xDDDDD

aladdin maldito :iconfacepalmplz: pq tienes que tener esa ropa XD
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:iconhakowako:
HakoWako Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student General Artist
d'aw <3

lo sabia tenia boobies, mis ojos nunca vayan uvu (???)

pronto dibujare a Huo.. cuando termine unas cosas :iconlazycryplz:
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:icondapyzux:
Dapyzux Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xDDDDDDDDD

asdsada gracias!! <3

yaaa yo quero verla *-*
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:iconkoby-chan:
Koby-chan Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hostia, creí que era el de Magi LOL

Btw, bonita pose! BAILAAAALLLLL :icondogdanceplz:
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:iconnisha-potato:
Nisha-Potato Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
se ve muy tierna y arabe(?) xD es un amor <3333
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:iconhukugaro:
Hukugaro Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wooaa adoro todos los colores pastel y vivos coloreas tan genial y dibujas tan moe!!!! >//<
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:icondapyzux:
Dapyzux Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
asdasd
muchas gracias samy!!!!!
hace mil sin saber de ti xD
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:iconcabezaderevolver:
CabezaDeRevolver Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
COSITAA, parece una monita :3 me gusta mucho ^__^
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:icondapyzux:
Dapyzux Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
asdasd en serio?
:iconbrohugplz: muchas gracias miki!!!! <33
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:icondewott-kun:
Dewott-kun Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Writer
asdasdasdadsasda esta muy linda tobu!!!! :iconcute-plz:

genial trabajo dani nwn
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:iconarimi-desu:
Arimi-desu Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
hsavdasd esta hermosa *-*
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:icondapyzux:
Dapyzux Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
muchas gracias! :iconmahfeelzplz:
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:iconarimi-desu:
Arimi-desu Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
d na' *u*
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:icond-armi:
D-Armi Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
esta HERMOSHA DAPYY :iconloveloveplz: adoro el pimtado <3<3
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:icondapyzux:
Dapyzux Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
asdjkhaskdhkasdjshd -huyedehonor-

muchas gracias armiiiiiiii <33 kjhdfksdf
si? xD asdsad trato de encontrar una forma q me guste de pintar... todavía no me convenzo en el cabello :iconpapcryplz:
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:icond-armi:
D-Armi Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012
pues a mi me encantaaaa ;w;!!
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:icondapyzux:
Dapyzux Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
gracias armi ; w ;
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:iconcrisuchiha:
CrisUchiha Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional General Artist
awwwwwwww
le terminaste que linda <3
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:icondapyzux:
Dapyzux Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
asdsda si! :dummy:

muchas gracias criiis :iconloveloveplz:

deberías haber metido a chase ; w; quería ver q le tocaba(?)
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:iconcrisuchiha:
CrisUchiha Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Professional General Artist
de nada

ay!! es que me dio flojeritis n.nU
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